Humans Unlock Forbidden Power Making Progenitors Shiver | HFY | Sci-Fi Story
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Published 2024-04-02
All Comments (21)
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I suspect part 2 starts with Delphic saying, " Sorry about your crew, dude".
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Most extensive vocabulary I've heard recently from these stories. Keep it up.
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XO is not pronounced ZO. It is “X O” military speak for Executive Officer, second in command.
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Nice…. Vaguely Lovecraftian and with a touch of old science fiction. A good but wordy mesh. More please…
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Great story! I look forward to more "chapters"!
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More please.
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I have really enjoyed this book. Please, read more stories like this!
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I would suggest putting a period between the X and O, then it may be pronounced as X.O instead of zo.
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Way less errors than normal. I'll have to watch this channel
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And Ensign is pronounced, “En-sin”.
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I like this male voice. It sounds cleaner than others.
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Outstanding
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Yes....Even the Gods fell from grace...how can they expect humans to adhere to their visionary words...well.... May we grow in spirit together....there will always be bad apples coming in the barrel....cracks in the safeguards of a wisdom care...all the more necessity for infallibility in a Wisdom Code of understanding.
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Great story hope you continue this story
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That sound like we all are on the path to enlightenment. Not just the commander.
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Need to know how this turns out...where is part 2?
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Water the soup, scramble the eggs, put another place at the table Q, for humanity is coming home.
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I subed for part 2 of this story
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Man I wish this was a much longer story
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LOL The descriptions are so much like the old E.E. Doc. Smith writings in such series as the "Lensman" books... "coruscant scintillating deluges of vibrant energies inundating the target with overwhelming torrents of destruction"... or my version "the running dog lackeys of the industrial military complex arraigned against the peace-loving peoples of collective destiny..."
